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Sinner's House
By Emilee Fields
Indiana Junior High School
7th Grade
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
You open your eyes. You were staring up at a starry night sky. You could feel cold wet grass under you. You sit up off the the ground. You couldn't remember what happened to you, but it ended you up in the woods. You stand up, wiping some dirt off of your torn jeans, and look around. It was dark and cloudy and almost sunrise. You decide that it might be best to walk around. It would probably help you find an indication of where you were, and maybe memories might start coming back to you, revealing who you exactly are.
After awhile of stumbling around confused, you see a house up ahead. It was fairly large with peeling paint on it. The weeds were overgrown and running rampant. It obviously didn't show any sign of anybody living in there for years. Do you want to [[walk towards the house]] or [[turn another direction]] away from it? If you move on though, you don't really know what lies on up ahead, let alone when the next house will appear. But you don't like the abandoned haunted house feel or the dead trees that surrounded the decaying home.The wind was howling and the rustling of the tall pine trees was getting louder. This gave you an uneasy feeling. There probably wasn’t anyone living there anymore. You start walking around the house staying away from the property perimeter. As you get a couple yards ahead of the rickety house, you turn back around one more time. You could still [[walk towards the house]] or if you want, you can [[continue moving on]]. You continue walking. You start to hear the pounding of leaves behind you. You walk a little faster. The wind picks up and the air gets colder. Everything goes quieter. You feel your stomach drop. You begin to start a slight run. A loud hissing noise comes from behind you. The footsteps turn into multiple loud crunching noises.
You whip your head around as you are running to see what is chasing you. You see a humongous, towering monster pounding towards you. It had a large fat body with three pairs of legs sprouting out of it. It was hard to see in the dark what it fully looked like, but one glance was enough for you. It screeched a loud ear splitting scream. Your eardrums felt like they were gonna split.
It pounded towards you. It sprang up and jumped on you, pushing you hard to the ground. THUMP! You feel your bones crack from the weight of it’s misshapen legs. It opens it's wide mouth and it inches towards your face. You close your eyes tightly out of fear. You feel a sharp pain overflow your body as you feel jagged needles being inserted in the sides of your face. The last thing you saw was rows and rows of sharp thin teeth closing in on you.
[[ENDING ONE]]
You begin your limp towards the old home. You notice a bad feeling in the pit of your stomach. You still move closer. You begin to feel lightheaded as the trees around you start spinning. You feel like you are about to faint. You walk up the porch steps. They let out a loud CREAK. You walk up to the door. You feel drowsy. You see that there is a doorbell. Do you want to try to [[ring the doorbell]] or just [[knock on the front door]].You knock on the front door. Nothing happens. You shake the doorknob. It falls off and the door slowly opens with a loud rasp. You step inside slowly. The air was musty and unclean. You could feel it burning your lungs. Everything was slowly going dark. Your arms and legs get heavy. You fall to the ground and you hear your head crack on the broken wooden floors.
[[Wake up]]
You open your eyes and sit up. Your head was pounding. Where were you? You were in a pinkish room with lots of dollhouses and toys scattered about. You hear light footsteps walking around outside of the bedroom door. It stops directly in front of the white birch door. The air grows colder. The door slowly clicks open, letting it open in an unhurried way. You close your eyes.
"Oh you're up deary!" You heard a woman say.
[[look up]]"We have been expecting you. But it really was an inconvenience when you fainted, to be honest. You’ve been out for a day!" Said the strange woman.
She stood in the doorway staring at you. She had peachy skin and layers of pink and red makeup that stood out. She seemed to be mostly skinny, but she was a bit plump. Her hair was a bright blonde and she had piercing, strict, icy eyes. She had a plate of cookies with her and some milk on a platter.
She walked over to you. "Would you like some cookies dear? My name is Devorator." She set the plate of cookies on your lap. You look at her confused. She smiles a wide grin. The one thing you notice about her, is her horrible rotted teeth and breath. [[You decide to eat the cookie]] though, just to be nice.
Welcome to the end! You have complete ending one! You have been killed by one of the sins or monsters in this game.
If you would like to play again, click here to go back to [[outside in the woods]] You take a bite out of it. It tasted just as good as it smelled. "You should drink the milk with it. Cookies always taste better with milk." The lady said in an urgent tone. You picked up the milked and sniffed it. You were suddenly overtaken by a weird smell. It still smelled mostly like milk, except a bit off. "Go on now." She said. You think for a second. Would it hurt to try? Do you want to [[drink the milk]] or [[refuse to drink the milk]]?You take a sip of the milk, following the strange lady's insists. It tasted terrible. Your dropped the glass, coughing loudly. You started to feel sick to your stomach. You continue coughing until you couldn't even breathe. "Aww dearie! You made a mess! pueriPueriPueriPueritia will be so mad... Oh well! Now the job is done. Goodnight..." You started to cough up blood. She began to walk out of the room. She stopped in the doorway. She turned to look at you. Her smile was spread all the way across her face. She seemed to have sharper teeth than a normal human. She then once again turned away from you and walked away, closing the door behind her. Your eyes begin to drift closed. Slowly your body goes numb. Your entire body feels heavy as you drifts off to sleep...
[[ENDING TWO]]
You had a bad feeling about all of this, so you decide it is not a good idea to take a drink. You put it bad down and make up a lie. "Sorry I don't really like milk with my cookies. But thanks anyways!" You put on a fake smile. You look at her directly in the eyes. For a second, her smile seemed to falter. Her eyes filled a sudden suspicion and hatred. But she quickly blinked her eyes a couple times and it seemed to disappear. As if she was never mad at you. She picked up the platter of cookies and the milk quickly and just stared at you. "Well then when you are ready, you may move on." She walked on towards the door, but stopped and turned. "Oh dearie... You are going to have such a fun time here. My condolences to your family, but you have passed on for now." Devorator turned back stiffly and moved onward leaving the door open.
[[Get off the bed]]Welcome to the end! You have complete ending two! In this ending you have gotten the 'natural' death ending.
If you would like to play again, click here to go back to [[outside in the woods]] You stand up off the canopy bed and brush yourself off. You felt a bit overheated and sore. You spot a mirror in the corner. You check out how you look. Your blonde hair was wild from laying down and in messy tangles. The bags under your blue eyes were very noticeable, and your clothes were torn and dirty. Your dark skin had spots of dirt and scratches. You sniffed your baggy shirt. It smelled of alcohol and other substances. You couldn't quite remember what happened the other night, it was mostly just a blur. It will probably come back to you later. You look over to the door and see that the hallway suddenly looked much darker than it had. You decide to [[go ahead through the hallway.]] You decided it would be best to explore and get out of this house. SLAM! Not even a couple of feet away from the door, you hear a loud bang come from behind you. You turn around feeling anxious. The door that was just open a second ago to the room you just left, was now closed. You shakingly walked up to it and try to turn the doorknob. Locked. On the door you noticed it said, 'pueriPueriPueriPueritia.' It explains the girlish likeness of the room.
A little freaked out, you turn back and continue examining the rooms in the hallway. The next door opened up to an average looking bedroom, that obviously held two messy people, that loved food. There were plates stacked up on each side of the room, and on the left side the walls were covered with sticky notes, recipes, and many, MANY pictures of food. The right side was just plain and messy, with clothes and other strange items thrown about. The colors were a mix of blues, one side a dark blue, the other a light blue. You began to wonder if there was something deeper hiding underneath all of this.
[[Examine more rooms]]
You continue walking as the the hallway lights begin to dim. You see a large dark door as the hallway finally ends. The aura felt dark and murky. The air was chilly. You see the stairs leading down to the first floor on your left. You felt like you wanted to run down the stairs and never turn back. But the door in front of you, the one that you wanted to hide from desperately, was cracked open. Like it was inviting you to come in.
[[move forward to the room]].You walk down the stairs, leaving the room behind you. As you began to head down the winding staircase, you stopped. There was a girl in a baggy sweatshirt and ripped up short-shorts. You slowly approach her. When you stop next to her, she speaks.
"Hey." She said casually, staring at the wall.
"Hi." You responded carefully.
"Why don't you sit down next to me? I think you need a break." She said carelessly.
Do you want to [[Refuse Her]] or [[Take a break]]?You poke your head through the doorway. You lightly knock on the door to let anybody know that you are coming in. The bedroom was larger than the others, and looked exactly like your private dorm, back at your college. Except for the fact that everything was black and white. You looked over to your right to see a boy your age working on a computer. He slowly spun around in his swivel chair, looking at you. You were taken aback by his beautiful bright blue eyes. He looked at you up and down, his eyes looking at every detail, like you couldn't anything from him.
"Oh you're awake. That's a relief. pueriPueriPueriPueritia threw a fit and insisted that you sleep in her bed instead of mine." He said calmly. You tried to imagine how you would react waking up in another guy's bed. Although it could have saved you that creepy encounter with that girl Gula.
"So pueriPueriPueriPueritia was the little girl's bedroom that I woke up in?" You asked.
"Little boy, you mean." He said carelessly, turning back to his work.
"O-Oh um I'm sorry! I s-shouldn't have assumed." You felt your cheeks grow hot from embarrassment.
"Why don't you sit on my bed? So you aren't standing around awkwardly." This boy could really read you like a boy.
[[Sit on his bed]]
You walk over to sit on his bed. It was surprisingly comfortable and bouncy. You take a good look around the room. You looked back at the boy. You felt like you wanted to get to know him, but you also kinda didn't want to go near him. His atmosphere was warm, calming, carefree, and all sorts of other good emotions, yet you don't know why you want to run away.
"The name's PraePraesenti." He said. You felt taken aback by his words.
"O-Oh my name's Peccatum." You stuttered.
"I know."
"What?" You questioned.
"I know a lot about you. A lot more than you'd expect." The way he said those words sent a shiver up your spine.
[[Question Him Further]]"Do I happen to know you? You seem really familiar." You said.
He turned away from his work again. He purposely looked at you in the eyes.
"Yes. We know each other quite well. Yet not really. You never see me, but I am always see you. It all depends on whether or not you if you ever decide to look me in the eyes and say, 'I am not afraid of you.'" He said with a dark tone.
"U-Um sorry I-I still don't have any recollection of seeing you anywhere. M-My entire existence is s-still a bit fuzzy." You said with a chuckle. You felt yourself stumbling over your words. You apparently did this when you 'like' someone.
His gaze seemed to harden. He looked at you up and down, examining every detail, every perfection, every flaw that you had. "Oh you remember it. You just don't want to accept it." You felt surprised at his words. "You remeber every small detail, far too well. You just want to forget everything while you're here. And you don't even realise it." You let your hands drop to your sides. You somehow knew he was right. He stood up and sat back down on the bed facing you.
[[Scooch Back Against the Wall]]You pressed the button. No noise came from it. You hold down the rusted doorbell and press your ear against the door. There was no noise coming from inside. The doorbell was broken! You decide to just [[knock on the front door]].The hallway seemed to go on forever. There were also more shared bedrooms. One had a wall with an orange and green side. On the right, It was a typical bedroom. It had the basic white girl feel to it, with pictures of many famous people on it from fashion magazines. To the left there were many hearts and papers with hearts on them. There was a bulletin board overflowing with pictures of people, some with horns draw on them, others with hearts taped to them. But there was a small trash can underneath it, with little shreds of pictures of people. It was a little creepy so you moved onto the others.
The next room had the contrasting colors of purple and yellow. The yellow side had many fancy looking things, that seemed to try to distract you from the overly clutter of the room. It had many piggy banks and expensive clothing that only the rich kids your age bought. The purple side had a lot of pictures and selfies of the same person and a very large mirror on the wall. There was also one of those metal signs that read in cursive, and it said, 'Superbia.'
Each of the rooms only had two beds in them except for one. It was a small little place. There were things sticking out of drawers, curtains and from behind a dresser. There were dents in the walls and the ceiling. There were many hazardous broken trinkets pushed into piles on the floor. This never ending hallway had some doors that you wanted to open, that gave you a good feeling, but couldn't open. There were some that you just wanted to stay away from, with a feeling that you were used to, and darker ones too. You just decided to stop snooping around, so you weren’t discovered.
[[Move on]]"I hope you escape this place of sin. You were supposed to live a long, happy life. But the longer you spend here, the smaller the window leading back to your old life gets. Do you really want to throw it all away?" He said, sending another chill down your spine,
"H-How do I know you again?" You asked yet again.
He put his arms on either side of you on the bed, basically pinning you down.
“W-What ar-” You started but he quickly interrupted you, saying,
“Why do you think your life is so worthless? Why won’t you admit it?” He seemed to yell at you.
You tried to pull you away, but he just pushed you up more against the wall. Your heart began to race and you knew your entire face was red. He leaned into you, towards you ear, whispering, “Why can’t you admit that you hate yourself. If you done so before, you wouldn’t have ended up here.”
You felt your heart drop. Your breath slowed. He was right. Why was he confronting your fears? He stayed there for a second. His scent was so familiar, it was just on the tip of your tongue. He sat back up and went to his desk. "You've gotten this far. You are so close. I believe in you." He flashed you a smile as he said that, making you blush harder. He went back to his work. "You should head downstairs. The others are waiting for you. If you take any longer, pueriPueriPueritia will throw a fit." He said jokingly. You nodded your head and quickly got up. You did NOT want to be up here anymore.
“Oh! Before I forget, keep this conversation between the two of us. Okay?” You quickly nodded your head, running out of the room.
[[go downstairs]]"You sure? You need this. You are more tired than you realize. A rest will help you later." She looked up into your eyes. She had oddly grey eyes that matched her grayish blonde hairstyle. so what do you want to do? [[Still refuse her]]? [[Take a break]]?You sit down next to her. "My name is Acedia. Now what I want you to do is lay down and rest your head on my lap." She demanded. Her voice was slow and sweet and slow, like honey. Her words easily persuaded you, and you couldn't help but listen to her. You followed her orders.
Her legs were like a pillow, making you just want to go to sleep and never wake up. "What I want you to do, is close your eyes and listen to my voice. Breath in and out, making you breathe slowly." You did as she said, and suddenly your eyes felt heavy. You were at peace. "Now let the oblivion consume you, do not fight it. Release any pressure in your body, and make everything go numb." You started to feel like you were falling. Everything was quiet. You didn't like this feeling. Do you still want to [[keep going]], or [[get up and run]].
You finally fell asleep. It felt good. You had wonderful dreams. They reminded you of the past. Before you started doing stupid things that messed up your life. You woke up to the sound of a little boy's voice shouting. "Hey! Peccatum! Wake up you dummy!" You sat up and looked around. You were still on the staircase. You realized that you felt really refreshed. Like you could do anything. "See, wasn't that refreshing?" Asked the girl. "Yeah, it actually kind of was." You said.
You looked down to the next platform. There was a little boy, about six or so, looking extremely mad. He wore a loose suit with a mix of baby blues and cotton candy pinks that made up his entire color palette. He a black flower crown on, while a white veil connected to it covering his face.
He straightened up. He stuck out his tiny hand. "I'm pueriPueriPueritia." You slowly took his hand. He suddenly pulled you up. "Now let's go!" The girl waved you a goodbye, and you waved back as the boys quickly dragged you down the stairs. "Alright you got to hurry and get through the rest of them so we can get you out of here!" He said with a little rush in his voice.
When you reached the bottom, you saw the front door again, wide open, calling you to go outside. You let go of pueriPueriPueritia's hand and began running for the door. Right before you reached the door, someone quickly stood in front of you, blocking the door. "Where do you think you are going? It's breakfast time! Now come on!"
[[follow the person]]You try to get up, but she holds you down. "Stop. You are going to mess up the process. You NEED this." You continued to struggle. "S-Stop! I don't want to do this anymore!" You screamed. Her grip around you became stronger. It felt like she was choking you. You only fought harder. "I SAID STOP!" Her voice was no longer sweet, but instead distorted. You felt a sharp pain in your throat. You could no longer breathe. Blood began to fill your lungs and mouth, as your eyes shot open. Her fingers were long and like needles, and three of them were shot through your throat. You fell back down, unable to move. You stared up her face. She had three pairs of eyes, all droopy and black. "You know you really should listen to somebody that is trying to help you... Now close your eyes and go back to sleep..." She said slowly, her voice was still distorted. You closed your eyes again going back to sleep forever.
[[ENDING ONE]]
"No sorry. I really gotta get going." You said scratching the back of your neck. "Well okay." She said cooley. You quickly ran all the way down the stairs. When you reached the bottom, a little boy called your name. "Peccatum! Finally!" A six year old boy ran up and hugged you, squeezing you tightly. he was wearing a baggy suit with a mix of baby blues and cotton candy pinks that made up his entire color palette. "Let's go eat breakfast! He said. He dragged you to a large table, seating you at the head. He sat next to on the right. Praesenti sat to the left to you. You looked at the already seated people around you, noticing some new and old ones. There was Devorator on the left side, two seats away from Praesenti. Superbia was directly next the boy. He still stood as tall as ever. Cupiditas across from Devorator. You suddenly knew the names of all the names everyone here. A girl named Invidia sat next to Pueritia pouting, staring at you. The girl you met in the hallway, Acedia, had sat next to Devorator. The boy named Ibidine sat next Invidia, still giving you a lustful look. But then you looked at the boy directly across from you. He had a look of absolute disgust on his face and just stared at you. His name was Irae.
"Alright now that everyone is here, dig in!" Devorator said cheerfully.
[[Start Eating]]
You followed the boy into the dining room, and was seated at the head of the table. You looked around at everyone. Praesenti sat to the left of you and pueriPueriPueritia directly to the right of you. Acedia had sat down on the left side of the table, furthest from you. You looked at everyone. You saw some familiar faces. Some you never saw before. But you knew all of their names. There was Devorator on the left side, two seats away from Praesenti. Superbia was directly next the boy. He still stood as tall as ever. Cupiditas across from Devorator. You suddenly knew the names of all the names everyone here. A girl named Invidia sat next to pueriPueriPueritia pouting, staring at you.The boy named Ibidine sat next Invidia, still giving you a lustful look. But then you looked at the boy directly across from you. He had a look of absolute disgust on his face and just stared at you. His name was Irae.
"Alright now that everyone is here, dig in!" Devorator said cheerfully.
[[start eating]]
The food tasted really good. You just kept eating. And you just kept getting more. It tasted so good. "Why does he get more food than me?!" Invidia spoke up. She looked to you. "Don't you feel guilty? That you are getting the 'special treatment,' while the rest of us have to look at you stuff yourself like a pig! It's not fair." Invidia seemed really mad. You suddenly felt guilty. You put your silverware back and stared at your lap.
"Yeah! I deserve more food than him! What has he done to deserve this?" Cupiditas spoke up.
Devorator began to speak. "Now now, Peccatum is our guest, why don't we treat him like one?"
"God dang it why can't I ever eat a meal in peace!" Irea yelled, slamming his fist on the table. He was still giving you the death glare. He seemed to have anger issues.
"Come on why you defending him?! Peccatum give me some of your food." Invidia stuck out her hand, gesturing your plate.
"While you are at it, gimme your desert Peccatum." Cupiditas also stuck out his hand, while a slight grin on his face. You began to pick up your food, but Praesenti spoke up. "Stop it Peccatum. Don't listen to them. They are just trying to get to you." He put a hand on your lap. pueriPueriPueritia had a worried look on his face. He looked really guilty.
[[Put Down Your Plate]]The food tasted really good. You just kept eating. And you just kept getting more. It tasted so good. "Why does he get more food than me?!" Invidia spoke up. She looked to you. "Don't you feel guilty? That you are getting the 'special treatment,' while the rest of us have to look at you stuff yourself like a pig! It's not fair." Invidia seemed really mad. You suddenly felt guilty. You put your silverware back and stared at your lap.
"Yeah! I deserve more food than him! What has he done to deserve this?" Cupiditas spoke up.
Devorator began to speak. "Now now, Peccatum is our guest, why don't we treat him like one?"
"God dang it why can't I ever eat a meal in peace!" Irea yelled, slamming his fist on the table. He was still giving you the death glare. He seemed to have anger issues.
"Come on why you defending him?! Peccatum give me some of your food." Invidia stuck out her hand, gesturing your plate.
"While you are at it, gimme your desert Peccatum." Cupiditas also stuck out his hand, while a slight grin on his face.
Praesenti put a hand on your knee. You felt a surge of confidence. "No. You should eat your own food first Invidia." She had a shocked look on her face which turned to anger.
[[Continue Eating]]You felt a surge of confidence. "No. You should eat your own food first Invidia." She had a shocked look on her face which turned to anger. She stood up.
"Why won't you listen to me?! Gimme your food!" She yelled.
"No! Why won't you learn to appreciate what you already have to eat!" You yelled back. You stood up too. A rage filled her eyes.
"You only ask for other things because you feel self conscious about how little you think you have!" You continued.
"Peccatum you should stop. You're taking this too far." Praesenti said, tugging on your shirt. pueriPueriPueritia nodded his head in agreement.
"No she needs to learn to mind her manners!" You looked back to her. There were tears in her eyes.
"SHUT UP! YOU DON'T KNOW CRAP ABOUT ME!" Invidia screamed. You saw her hand begin to grip her fork. Maybe you should've backed down while you had the chance. But no turning back now.
"But it's so easy to read see how jealous you are of everyone." You said. She acted so fast that you didn't even see her moving. Her voice became distorted as she threw her fork at you, screaming, "SHUT UP!"
[[Try to Dodge]]"Why won't you listen to me?! Gimme your food!" She yelled. She stood up.
"No! Why won't you learn to appreciate what you already have to eat!" You yelled back. You stood up too. A rage filled her eyes.
"You only ask for other things because you feel self conscious about how little you think you have!" You continued. You stood up too. Tears stung her eyes.
"SHUT UP! YOU DON'T KNOW CRAP ABOUT ME!" She screamed. You saw her hand begin to grip her fork. Maybe you should've backed down while you had the chance. But no turning back now.
"But it's so easy to read see how jealous you are of everyone." You said. She acted so fast that you didn't even see her moving. Her voice became distorted as she threw her fork at you, screaming, "SHUT UP!"
[[Try to dodge]]A sharp throbbing starts up as you slam against the wall. You stand there for a second, just looking down at yourself. A large had managed to stab you, right where your heart was. You pulled it out. You began to bleed out heavily. You took a look at that fork. A slight green liquid was on it.You figured it had some sort of bad poison on it. Everyone looked at you shocked, except for Invidia and Irae. They both had wide grins on their faces. "Jealousy really does kill..." You said.
"No! You can't die! My toys will be destroyed! I can't go back to the cruciatu room!" pueriPueriPueritia screamed fearfully, tears running down his face. Praesenti looked like a ghost. Everything went red as you fell over, your head cracking on the edge of the dining table.
[[ENDING ONE]]
You quickly moved your body out of the way, closing your eyes. When you opened them again, you saw the large fork stuck in the wall. If you hadn't gotten that reast, you might have not made it. You body relaxed. Everyone stared at you. Irea still looke even madder at you. Invidia looked dumbfounded at the fact she had missed. You looked back at the door. You still felt like you could do anything.
[[RUN FOR IT]]You ran as fast you could for the front door. You heard a lot of banging behind you as someone began running behind you. You felt someone grabb for your shirt, but barly missed.
As you got outside, a rush of wind hit your face. You tried to jump off the porch, but you pushed you down the steps. You landed with a hard THUMP and got a mouth full of dirt. You tried to wiggle away but you were pinned down by Irea. "You can't escape now!" He screamed. He but his large hands against your throat and pushed down, choking you. You tried to pry his hands off, but you couldn't. So you hit his face as hard as you could. He fell off of you, and you continues the fight. You knew rage had always been a problem for you, but it was never this strong before. You fought hard. You had so many cuts and bruises. You reconised this unpleaseant scared feeling before; when you had first seen this sinner's house.
"Why do you keep fighting back!" Irea yelled, as he pinned you down.
"Because! It's not right to always hold grudes like this! To stay like this!" You yelled.
"Why won't you just submit to me! Let this happen. You can't escape it."
You felt tempted gto let yourself die, to finally let it happen. You had wished it this entire time for it to come, right? So let it happen. But you knew that if you gave yourself another chance, you could make things right again.
[[SUBMIT]]You stopped struggling and let your arms fall to your sides. "Good... finally...Wait what is with that look on your face?" He asked confused. Your eyes were full of care and smiled a small smile.
"We both know it is not right to keep doing this. To keep holding grudges against each other. I think it's time for both of us to stop." You said slowly.
"What? No we can't do that- it's ridiculous! We will ALWAYS hate each other!" He said with a sneer. He tightened his grip around your neck.
"I-I have to say this. Or else we will never be able to move on."
"Just die already!" He squeezed tighter.
"I love you Irea." You said. He paused for a moment and just stared into your eyes. "And all the others. I can't change you or me without pain. ANd I could never do that." You saw everyone in that house staring at you.
"No stop! Don't say it! Hate me already! Hate yourself! IT'S THE ONLY WAY!" He screamed.
"N-No it's not..." You could barely breathe.
" Devorator, Superbia , Cupiditas... Invidia, Acedia, Ibidine... Irea..." You said.
"DON'T YOU EVER SHUT UP!" Irea's voice cracked.
"I-I forgive you-u.... All of you." You said as tears welled up in your eyes.
Irea looked at you. He let go of your neck. Tears ran down his face and he just sat back. You leaned in close to his face. "I forgive you Irea.." you said as you leaned into him. You pulled him into a light kiss. You saw the other sins in the doorway beginning to fade away. Some were crying, some were waving, others celebrated with joy, and some just stared in amazement. You began to feel Irea fade away too. "Thank you... for freeing us." He said quietly. And suddenly you were alone. The door to the house was now closed. You got up and brushed yourself off. You walked to where the property ended. You stood there, the wind blowing in your face. Then it was time to go. You closed your eyes and walked into the forest.
[[ TRUE ENDING ]]You stared at the spring weather from your window. It was all a dream. You had woken up in a hospital bed. The report said:
Patient: Pecca Fixum
Sex: Male
Age: 21
In for: Drug and alchole over dose.
You were found inside that old house, passed out. You had been to a party the night before and you got pretty waated and high. You were passed for anbthoer two days. You stared at the people walking below you. You wanted to do better. Be a better college student. A better son. Maybe you could get a boyfriend. You can't rid of the things about you, you can only come to terms with them and try to use them as motivation.
[[EXPLANTION]]Hi! So this story was about your character fighting with his inner demons. His inner demons were based on the seven deadly sins. All the names are in Latin. Here is their rough translations:
Pecca: (Short for Peccatum) Sin
Explanation; He is full of sin and leading a bad life throughout the story.
Pueritia: Childhood
Explanation; Pueritia was supposed the younger version of Pecca which talks about his child like personality.
Praesenti: Present
Explanation; Praesenti was supposed to another version of Pecca in his head. He has an argument with himself, confronting his inner fears.
Devorator: Glutton
Explanation; Devorator was supposed to represent the sin Gluttony with his room having all the recipe notes in it. She share a room with the sloth sin. She tried to poison you at the beginning, but failed if you didn't eat the cookie.
Superbia: Pride
Explanation; Superbia stood tall but didn't show up much because Pecca doesn't have confidence in himself. He shared a room Cupiditas.
Cupiditas: Greed
Explanation; Pecca was known to be greedy when it came to sweets, so that is why he was seen trying to take Pecca's sweets from him. He shared a room with Superbia. He had many piggy banks and was a hoarder.
Invidia: Envy
Explanation; Pecca asked Invidia why she didn't ever appreciate anything she ever got, so it basically him asking himself why he couldn't ever appreciate what he did have. He was often a bit self conscious of how little he had as a child so he never wanted to seem poor. She has many pictures of rich famous people she wanted to be like. She shared a room with the lust sin.
Acedia: Sloth
Explanation; Pecca used sleep as an escape from the world around him and used it as a comfort source.He wanted to disappear into the void. Acedia was careless with everything because Pecca when he was upset would just shut down. They share a room with The gluttony sin.
Ibidine: Lust
Explanation; Ibidine didn't speak out much because he didn't want anyone to know that fact that he is gay. His lustful side labeled people to who was likeable evil, and then there was the dark violent side, as seen with the torn up pictures of the people Pecca hates most. They share a room with the envy sin.
Irae: Wrath
Explanation;Irae was seen to have random outbursts, like in his room by himself how there is dents in the wall and many broken things. Pecca struggled with his anger most. But in the end, Pecca forgives himself for his flaws.
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